Prinzz_ludo

Hey there Chantal - 

Thank you for submitting your map! I have a bit to say on it:

Firstly, I'm not familiar with the game Ludo; did some Googling and it appears it's not something found in America by my guess. But referencing images, it looks like you did a good job recreating the game board. The colored pieces look nice and bright and the two dice look great. 

While I'm all for this game recreation into a map, I don't believe its full potential has been achieved yet.

The layout is a bit bland; all of the game squares are the exact same shape and size which creates some monotony. Although it may be akin to the real life layout of the game board, some different sized/spaced jumps would add to the uniqueness of the map and give it some life. The corners have an extremely brief and linear parkour section, and wouldn't encourage someone to venture over there and explore it. I understand this is designed as a small open map, but expanding on the corner parkour would give this map another layer of depth and playability. You could possibly put the two dice in the middle of the map, and have the corner routes stretch out to the middle, creating a second layer of gameplay and running. 

Two other side notes: the first would be the flooring - the sandy complexion of the floor makes it feel more like a sandbox with some blocks in it, rather than a true game board. I would possibly play around with the floor color, perhaps going with a darker brown, something akin to a wood board. My last point would be explore your creativity! Your other maps in rotation make good use of your imagination, and I think this map could be quite fun as a prorun map if some small adjustments are made to really make it pop. 

I will be declining this submission for now, but feel free to submit it again soon!

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