What name do you want your map to be called if accepted? Prin_Beach
What name is your map called currently on Map Build? Princess5
What round time do you want your map to have (minimum is 3 minutes and maximum is 10 minutes)? 4 minutes
What category is your map in on the current map list? Pro run
What makes your map stand out from other maps? No one else have build this.
What build permission do you want your map to be (nomodify, modifyonly, normal)? If normal, do you want to allow pillaring? Nomodify
Does your map have custom physics? No
Does your map have custom MOTDs? No
Does your map have custom bot AIs? No
Does your map have secrets? No
Who are the authors of your map? Princess
Changes: I changed the texturepack, so its not standard anymore. I removed everything I had built in the building and I completely changed it. In the building I also made areas that you can't come, so the building isn't that big anymore. I added parkours blocks at the balcony, so you can easily come inside the building. I added a lot of jumps at the water of the beach and some jumps at the beach umbrella. I added a bar at the beach and I changed the colors on the beach. I also blocked the outsides of the building, so you can't come there. Because of the blocked areas, the map size isn't that huge anymore. Also the added parkours jumps make it a lot more fun. The map isn't as empty as it was anymore. So I changed the map with all given feedback.
Thank you for all the changes you have made to the map so far, unfortunately after careful consideration we still do not believe this map is up to a standard where you can have a trial for it.
Although you have cut the size of the map, it is still rather large. This isn't necessarily a negative thing, however the space that is being used is not being utilised in a way to improve the gameplay.
The rooms in the house could be designed better to be fun and interesting to pro run through. An example of this would be the the beds, more could be done in these areas to create an interesting pro run layout. You need to add more rooms and flesh the building out and this could be a pretty exciting pro run. I would avoid using /copy /paste for furniture in rooms if you're doing this.
The outside area is large and open, this should be condensed further.
Also please take into consideration the theme of your map, as this may give you some ideas of what to come up with. It currently isn't giving much beach vibes, but this is not a crucial attribute, more of an advisory.
If you have any questions, you know you can just DM me.