Motel resubmission

Apologies for the late response. Reason mainly being that the re-addition poll maps are still on trial until Sunday. 

This version is a very nice upgrade from the original version. I can tell a lot of effort went into the outside terrain as well. That's a very nice touch. That, in combination with the skybox gives this map a very unique vibe which I really like.

The gameplay is also tremendously improved. Most of the buildings are now functional gameplay elements and the random invisible walls aren't a thing anymore.

There are a few small things I would like to point out, though. The first one are the door blocks. While they're mostly fine, and certainly not a reason to decline this map over at all, I think it would be better if they're just removed altogether as they block people's view. In addition, the doorways could be made wider. Instead of the current one block wide doorways, make them at least 3 blocks wide.

Secondly, a small aesthetic thing: at /tp 125 97 98 some of the ground under the water is made out of dark pillar but the rest is still dirt. I suspect it's just something that was looked over and forgotten during the map's creation? Regardless, it's not a big deal but just something I wanted to point out.

Thirdly, and this opinion can vary widely from other players, but I think the parkour at /tp 77 104 81 should be more accessible from the ground. The way to get there is pretty obscure, since you not only have to get on the wall, but then you also need to spot that little corner jump at /tp 74 104 78 to get there. The reason why I am bringing this up is because the floating block parkour leads you to a relatively big part of the map. In my opinion, paths to such crucial areas on a map should be easily findable, especially on prorun maps.

Lastly, I noticed there's a portal somewhere on the map but I couldn't spot it. Could you tell me where it is? I'm checking this because I can't put maps on trial that potentially have secrets that are way too obscure to find through normal gameplay.

All in all, I think this map looks very promising and I will very likely place it on trial after Sunday. In the meantime, while it's on hold, you could take a look at the feedback and make the final adjustments to make this map just that tiny bit more polished.

#On Hold

Putting a portal there is fine, but I'd make it an invisible or water portal instead of a solid block. Alternatively, you could remove it altogether and just make a way to the roof of the building at /tp 104 101 80 ?

I like the layout of this map, I think it would be fun. I do wish there was a little more detail to the motel itself as I feel like the maps strengths are the outside areas. I like the attention to detail in the background of the map, I also like the lbs that blend in with the buildings as subtle parkour, it's a nice touch. Best of luck!